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G. A. Webb
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since 2000-01-21
Posts 441
Stanton, California, USA

0 posted 2001-08-15 10:18 PM


Chained and collared
Tear drops fall
I was not scholared
Not at all
In the ways
Of this strange place
So I count days
And fall from grace

I walk an incline
Constantly
With no relief
In sight for me
Or even one
On which to lean
They turn and run
With hearts unclean

Leaving me now
All alone
A ritual cow
For sins they've shown
Yet still it's me
That pays the price
I am the lamb
The sacrifice

G. A. Webb

Regret not that which you have done,
Rather that which you haven't


© Copyright 2001 G. A. Webb - All Rights Reserved
qtpieelmo
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since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
1 posted 2001-08-17 12:53 PM


I like the beat of this & how the words go so well together & the story i know all to well--great work!   LOVE ELMO <3
G. A. Webb
Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441
Stanton, California, USA
2 posted 2001-08-19 12:52 PM


Thanks Qt, I'm glad you liked this ans sorry to hear that you can relate. Don't worry, you'll find another boyfriend. And this one will be better. That's my prediction...hehe! Thanks again!  

G

Regret not that which you have done,
Rather that which you haven't


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