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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2001-08-15 06:04 PM


Loser

Sometimes you knock your opponent
out with one punch and when
you hear that bell go gong
you think you have become King Kong.
But it doesn't take long at all
til you realize pride comes before a fall.
Sometimes you want to give up without a fight
and you know that's just not right.
Sometimes your feelings are out to lunch
and once again you find yourself
the recipient of a sucker punch.
Sometimes you want to win no matter the cost
but when the final count is made
you discover you still have lost.

Jameslee@August15,2001

© Copyright 2001 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
qtpieelmo
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1 posted 2001-08-15 08:40 PM


I liked this   LOVE ELMO  
Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2001-08-16 01:41 AM


JamesMichael~

'once again you find yourself
the recipient of a sucker punch'


I know I just hate it when that happens~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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serenity blaze
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3 posted 2001-08-17 04:12 AM


I can SO relate to this...you having rough days too James Michael? smile for me...just this once I thought I could sleep? and the toilet overflowed...BAD...cut off valve frozen...no plunger...yep...sucker punched again...smile with me, will ya?  
JamesMichael
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4 posted 2001-08-18 04:26 AM


Thank you Elmo, Marge and serenity for your comments...I may feel like a loser sometimes but I can always find a smile or two...James
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