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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2001-08-14 11:11 PM


The scene is set as the deal takes place
The need is fed and the money changes hands
in the sleazy back streets
far away from prying eyes

The "lion" is the king of the drug jungle
and the "prey" is trapped in
an unreal world where life
means so little and the next
fix could mean "survival" or death
A rollercoaster ride that never ends
only picking up speed throughout
its journey of destruction

Dimly lit back alleys and side streets
are where the deals are done
and lives are lost
The "lion" walks away victorious
a he greedily counts his dirty money
The "prey" slinks away into the shadows
like a vampire scared of the light

Alone he sits in the doorway
of an old disused warehouse
where he pulls up his sleeve
to reveal a multitude of needlemarks
Another mark will now be added to the tally
but will this be the final hit?

Will he die alone in this God-foresaken place
void of companionship
void of love
void of hope
void of education
void of a normal life?

Suetang

© Copyright 2001 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
WRBreezin
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since 2001-08-04
Posts 212

1 posted 2001-08-15 09:01 AM



Reality bites in each word, certainly a jungle of despair. Greatly enjoyed.

Willie

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