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Rebelious
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since 2001-05-27
Posts 57
Kansas, USA

0 posted 2001-08-13 04:02 AM



"love hurts"

Is this love? Can it be something so right hurts so much?
I know its love when I am with you and long for your touch.
But I guess with love comes hurt..the good and bad?
But I don't understand it how can love make me so sad?
Before I met you I prayed for love everynight.
I fell head over heels in love with you at first sight.
That was the good but then came the heart break.
You took my heart, wich I let you take.
You walk away without giveing a hug or saying goodbye..
At first I always thought it was just you being shy.
And then you go and cheat on me, And I wonder whats wrong with me.
My feelings still here for you but shouldn't be.
You ask me for forgiveness, I don't know if i should.
I know our love wont last, sitting here wishing it could.
So I give you another chance, hopeing to god it will last.
I told you it wouldn't be easy, but lets forget the past.
Everytime you go away from me I think of you with another guy.
I try hard to dispurse this idea, but I can't and I know why.
You still treat me as if you don't want me around.
Even though I shower you with my love pound by pound.
So I figure your still cheating on me, with another man.
But for some odd reason here I still am.
My love for you will never perish,
For the time I spent with you I will always cherish.

© Copyright 2001 Dustin Ortiz - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 2001-08-13 04:54 AM


Enjoyed your thoughts on love...James
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2 posted 2001-08-13 02:05 PM


Love hurts.  I know.  Sometimes they say true love is letting go. I say blah.
Good poem Dustin.


angeliceyes48198
Junior Member
since 2002-05-28
Posts 16
Michigan,USA
3 posted 2002-05-28 08:35 PM


I know how you feel. There was someone I loved once upon a time and now I not only lost a lover but a close friend as well.
jenn08
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since 2002-05-29
Posts 12
Wa, USA
4 posted 2002-05-29 02:23 AM


No one has a life without love, and of course, with love comes pain.  Love deals with the heart, and unfortunately, they can break.  But everyone goes through this, it's a part of life, a part of living.  Know that you're not alone in this, but stay strong to what you Feel is right, what you know.  
LadyPeach1
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since 2001-06-04
Posts 282

5 posted 2002-05-30 08:48 PM


Your words totally hit me like a brick wall, this poem was SO sad.  To be hurt in that kind of way can tear a person in to pieces.  It hurts to be hurt, and I know how it feels.  Love isn't easy, But true love always finds a way.  Keep your chin up hunny!
Good write.
LadyPeach1

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