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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY 
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NOT SO PERFECT ME I am a perfectionist. You may not see. But everything I do, is never good enough to me. I am a failure, in this place. Bittersweet, is all I taste. My glass's half empty, never full. Always the negative, this I know. Too much thinking, second guessing. Over & over, always messing. No matter how many times, it's never done. I'm never satisfied, so I give up & run. If it's not spur of the moment, then thoughts will flow. I'll hide all my feelings. I will not go. Don't want to burden, don't want others to grin, because of all that's not perfect, inside me, within. So I sit up all night, rarely sleep. I question my whole life, & then I weep. Do they just pretend to care? Feel sorry for me? Am I blind to the truth? Why can't I see? Please help me trust! Please help me be! Please let me rest! Please comfort me!  ELMO <3"I don't know the key to sucess, but the key to failure is trying to please everyone!" |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL. The keys to perfect success are the same set as the keys to perfect failure. (It's the doors that are different.) I liked the poem, though perfect it is not, but then I haven't got a clue how to fix it either, or even where its imperfections lie. But I won't stay up all night and fret over it, since I already do that for some of my own perfectly imperfect stuff. I really enjoyed reading your post. |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Thanx midnitesun--i know it's not perfect(nuthin i write is)--but I'm always workin to fix it & appreciate all the imput I can get  LOVE ELMO <3 |
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