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maeve
Member
since 2001-08-01
Posts 139
In the Outback

0 posted 2001-08-08 10:03 PM


Sweet words
hiding
empty promises
was all
I ever got
from you.
Now I have broken free
of the addiction
that is you.
I know
the sweet words
will come again
but
from someone
I can trust.

© Copyright 2001 Maeve O'Donnell - All Rights Reserved
Alan
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since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499
right next door
1 posted 2001-08-08 10:04 PM


Well done....I know these feeling well.
Dark Kisses
Member
since 2001-06-24
Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas
2 posted 2001-08-09 01:49 AM


Yeah I know this feeling also.  So sad!  
Well expressed!

Mags

maeve
Member
since 2001-08-01
Posts 139
In the Outback
3 posted 2001-08-09 05:39 PM


Alan and Mags, thank you both for reading. I hope the feeling goes soon.

Maeve

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2001-08-10 05:38 AM


Let us hope so...James
maeve
Member
since 2001-08-01
Posts 139
In the Outback
5 posted 2001-08-10 06:57 AM


Thanks James.  

Maeve

EagleOne
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since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...
6 posted 2001-08-10 10:30 AM


It's so sad that the sweet words and empty promises are so often tied so closely together.   You take care!

"Let me pierce the realm of glamour
So I know just what I am." ~ Van Morrison


maeve
Member
since 2001-08-01
Posts 139
In the Outback
7 posted 2001-08-10 05:26 PM


Thank you, EagleOne. It is a shame that the two so often go together.

Maeve

Take me home to Erin's shores,
to where my heart roams free.

samt
Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 52
Brisbane
8 posted 2001-08-14 05:15 AM


I know the feeling well. Hope you see everything.
Be free

maeve
Member
since 2001-08-01
Posts 139
In the Outback
9 posted 2001-08-14 06:16 PM


Sam, it's a feeling that comes over me sometimes, but not what I always feel.   Thanks for reading.

Maeve

Take me home to Erin's shores,
to where my heart roams free.

Suetang
Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
10 posted 2001-08-14 11:20 PM


Maeve
I truly hope you find the special love you truly deserve.  Take care.....Sue

Suetang

maeve
Member
since 2001-08-01
Posts 139
In the Outback
11 posted 2001-08-14 11:31 PM


Thank you Sue, I'm sure I will.  

Maeve

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