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Dark Poetry #3

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Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2001-08-08 10:26 AM

Crumbled with a soul fractured wide,
No place to run to or hide,
All that’s owned is sitting there
Cloth, skin, muscle, blood and hair.

Homeless in light and darkness,
Hopeless to the world’s great mess,
Unloved, undone, and unshared,
Forgotten to those who cared.

Begin wondering the streets,
Invisible never meets,
Slate and mind is now wiped clean,
Forgot is everything seen.

A life now simply stated,
Notice: all things vacated.

Gloom

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2001-08-08 05:50 PM

Hi PG! I've been a fan of yours for sometime now, as you so aptly define the darker voyages of the mind. As always, I enjoyed.

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

2 posted 2001-08-08 09:56 PM

I like this Gloom. Good read. I think this part got the closest to me.
Homeless in light and darkness,
Hopeless to the world’s great mess,
Unloved, undone, and unshared,
Forgotten to those who cared.

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

3 posted 2001-08-09 12:16 PM

Glad you enjoyed,
I guess it’s easier for me to describe where
I walk this path through life.

Thank you, Alan,
Pleased you could find a part to be close to.

Gloom

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