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Seeing Double |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Are we so different, you and I? seduced by kindred spirits repelled by restriction taking flight from conflict but so drawn to love Are we not simillar? still hopeful for passion in the chill routine of life content in our discontent settling for the famillar as the unknown is just too unsure... so why criticize or analyze, pointing gnarled finger when the basic being we are, shall always be... afraid... ~Tier 8/01 |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Interesting I think your title should have be worked Into the poem a bit, Or perhaps extracted from the poem. “Kindred Spirits” The expression was good Gloom |
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Dark Kisses Member
since 2001-06-24
Posts 364Flat lands of Kansas |
This was very well written. So I give it  lol Mags The hardest thing to do is watch someone you love, love someone else! |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thank you, Professor, I think that I'll rename it "kindred spirits," I like that. *smiles* Thank you, Mags, I appreciate your comment! :-) ~Tier |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Are you Madame Cleo?? I was just writing about something very similar to the fear you mention here. I liked this, alot. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice Tiersden...James |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
perhaps we are the same. . . but we must get over the fear. . . and move forward. . . excellent Tier. . . --------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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