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Allysa
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In an upside-down garden

0 posted 2001-08-07 03:13 PM


Apparently you've got a new girlfriend.
But you say you don't like her too much.
Apparently you say you don't care about me,
but why'd you want to come dancing?
Apparently you are thrilled,
that I don't like you anymore.
Apparently you don't know the truth,
I'll always like you.

I'm just hiding it right now,
because I've decided to move on,
but if you realize you miss me,
and you want to try again,
I'm always here.
Always have been.
Always will be.
I'll always care.

Apparently you're not who I thought you were.
I guess you must have changed.
Apparently bitterness bit you in the butt,
because you're not the sweet guy I once knew.
Apparently I'm psycopathic right now,
I want to call your "girlfriend" (if there is one),
and tell her the truth.
Apparently I do still care.


Someone once taught me that it doesn't matter what other people think of you as long as you like yourself.  That's what I live by.

© Copyright 2001 Allysa - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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1 posted 2001-08-08 05:42 PM


Smiling...sometimes it takes us a long time to see what is apparent to everyone else. Enjoyed.  
allis4angel
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2 posted 2001-08-08 06:09 PM


Very nice.
Congratulations (for the poem).

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3 posted 2001-09-04 04:32 PM


Hmmm...very well done! I couldn't have written better!

There's no point in living, if you can't feel alive!

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4 posted 2001-09-08 08:15 PM


seems like you been going through tough times...i hope things get better for you...

"I'm always here.
Always have been.
Always will be.
I'll always care."

you should let him know...that you STILL do...bye Allysa.

if i die before i wake...i pray the Lord my soul to take - when thugs cry-

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