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Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2001-08-07 02:21 PM


Just a pile of rubbish
To be taken with the trash,
Into plastic bags they stash,
Carted away at last.

The chairs got looks,
No one touched the books,
The dresser taken by crooks,
Then dipped in rain brooks.

The truck came at first light,
All just sitting there overnight,
Loaded up and taken from sight,
New door lock shining bright.

Returning to a complete eviction,
Finalized the total destruction.

Gloom



© Copyright 2001 Aszard Drazlom - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
1 posted 2001-08-07 06:49 PM


~Sighing~ at the gloominess of this one.
I shall almost be doing the same
when I use that dumpster soon enough..
but out of conviction
instead of eviction...

this one hit the spot today, as gloomy I have become. I had a long conversation with an old friend about the dumping of friendships...

huggsss to you  PG
~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364
east coast
2 posted 2001-08-08 09:22 AM


well written...

~Tier

Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082
of Depression
3 posted 2001-08-08 10:24 AM


Thank you, Nakdthoughts,
Always nice when a poem stimulates a memory
Or an emotion.
Convictions can be costly, but their lack even more so.

Thank you, Tiersdin

Gloom

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