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Dark Poetry #3

A Novel Idea

carolinadreams
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since 2000-07-20

Posts 142

0 posted 2001-08-05 05:54 AM

- A Novel Idea -

i lost myself somewhere within the line
so i write as i wrote before time
catch me and a full moon
catch all enough to swoon
as ** says i must be failed
yet as ** knows i prayed
not just for this and that
but i prayed today, and for today
my pure love of GOD has never been appreciated
and only now does anyone see
damn near killed so many times before
so close to literary whore
GOD never wrote, that's a gift to
the dying breed of true hell-bent souls that do find
did you know
how it shows
I for one (and only one) feel that it is time to write a novel
****e, it could've been yesterday
but i got lost within a line and
being so horribly sublime

J.L. Koehler

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

1 posted 2001-08-08 10:03 PM

I found this to be very interesting. I love the way you have written it.

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