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carolinadreams
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0 posted 2001-08-05 05:22 AM


-TheInterim-
i don't know it all balls to bones
but feeling is almost home
such substandard pieces of work alive
looking for the day and i
i listen to all and show
nothing of importance while i go
strand the most willing sets of souls
while i work to know what i know
change forever and the day in the midst
of another and a lost within the talk
and the trist
don't they know
haven't i shown
have i not felt it harder than most
have we not been through this hoax
here i stand an for once
all can stand for what is announced
as i lay here smug in my nothing
move as they may, and swerve today
i AM here, i Do fear, i feel MORE than most
gimme the stand, I'll show you the crayon
gimme the coast while i sail these seas
when i do make my mark i should've known
i will always be loved, even alone

Dedicated now and for ever to MPW
J.L. Koehler

© Copyright 2001 J.L. Koehler - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
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1 posted 2001-08-08 05:29 PM


whew...this is quite a torrent of thought here---sort of like a "thought record"--although admittedly I'm not quite sure of the intent? I did enjoy the free style of this piece.  
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