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Alysia182
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since 2001-06-22
Posts 19
CT

0 posted 2001-08-03 01:37 PM


The past is left behind.         **corny...yes, yes
My "happy days" are gone.          i know!**
I get alittle older, and alittle smarter,
Everytime I mow the lawn.

I used to be so happy,
Now, I'm always sad.
I always get in fights with my brother,
At me, he is always mad.

I look around at toys,
and pictures from the past.
I never knew,
That happiness would never last.

I see my childhood friends,
And remember all my childhood games,
When we used to run around,
Laughing, calling eachother's names.

I long for the happiness,
That I always used to be there.
And wonder where it has gone.
I guess growing up just isn't fair.


I had a writers block for a while, thats why I havent been posting much I guess.  But oh well.....

~Alysia~

Some day, you will ache like I ache!  ~Hole

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Dark Kisses
Member
since 2001-06-24
Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas
1 posted 2001-08-03 04:19 PM


I long for the happiness,
That I always used to be there.
And wonder where it has gone.
I guess growing up just isn't fair.

Great lines!!!

Mags

The hardest thing to do is watch someone you love, love someone else!

qtpieelmo
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since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
2 posted 2001-08-03 11:06 PM


I loved this & it is soo true--being older brings responsibilities (no fun) I just wanna be care-free & happy all day with no stress!!lol   LOVE ELMO <3
Jessica
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Member
since 2001-06-28
Posts 350
South AL
3 posted 2001-08-05 03:36 AM


I have a poem similar to this in Teen. And, no!, it isn't corny at all! Congrats on coming out of writer's block - I know what hell that can be.   I enjoyed this poem much! Hope to see more soon!

~Jess

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