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Dark Poetry #3
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sambot
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since 2001-08-02
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Brissy, Aust.
0 posted 2001-08-02 07:59 PM

Fate brings us to and fro
Fate will bring us further mo
© Copyright 2001 Sam T - All Rights Reserved
moshpit
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since 1999-11-25
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cebu, philippines
1 posted 2001-08-03 09:00 AM

wow.. i really enjoyed this one.. nice poem, sambot..
Jessica
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2 posted 2001-08-05 03:07 AM

I was confused a bit by the shortness. Although short poems can sometimes be the best, I think you could extend this. I enjoyed what was there... yet it left me longing for more.  
sambot
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since 2001-08-02
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Brissy, Aust.
3 posted 2001-08-08 07:44 PM

fate brings us (past&present)
fate will (future)(WILL)
FATE IS ALL UP TO YOU
Everything happons for a reason.
sam
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