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sambot
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since 2001-08-02
Posts 6
Brissy, Aust.

0 posted 2001-08-02 07:58 PM


Destiny is such a word
my love for you
is like a bird
Flying high
in the night sky
fly to you
my wings tell me to
fly to me
wish it would be
fly with you
we will see


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moshpit
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since 1999-11-25
Posts 143
cebu, philippines
1 posted 2001-08-03 09:04 AM


my wings tell me to
fly to me
wish it would be
fly with you
we will see

i like this part.. you write well, sambot..

Jessica
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since 2001-06-28
Posts 350
South AL
2 posted 2001-08-05 03:08 AM


The rhyming was a little off... but it flowed really well.   I enjoyed this read...
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