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sambot
New Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 6
Brissy, Aust.

0 posted 2001-08-02 07:56 PM


Meg,

I sit here and ponder
about your perfect heart
I sit here with wonder
why we are so apart

I think of you all the time
just walking up the street
or studying with such rhyme
our love was so complete

The one you will truly see
the one you felt sensually
the one who's heart is pure love
the one which makes up me

If you open your heart
we could never break apart
for I will show you the meanning of love
true friends, a pair o dove


© Copyright 2001 Sam T - All Rights Reserved
qtpieelmo
Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
1 posted 2001-08-03 11:01 PM


This was great--Welcome to DP   I'll be looking foward to more talent like this!! LOVE ELMO <3
Jessica
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Member
since 2001-06-28
Posts 350
South AL
2 posted 2001-08-05 03:33 AM


Your rhyming wasn't consistent but still a great poem! I hope to see more of your work.  

~Jess

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