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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nobody Don't know exactly when I became a nobody to you. Although it's been a long while since you've graced me with your smile. I can remember when you called me every day so full of excitement and energy. You would call me sweetheart amd tell me my voice was beautiful. The times we were together were full of stimulating conversation, romantic movies, sensual hugs full of love, and those yummy chocolate kisses. And one day when I ask you if you cared for me you told me you loved me. All of your special attention made me feel so important as you filled my life with a thousand magic moments. I hated to see the feelings that lived in my heart lose their luster. I'm not even sure exactly when or where or why they died. All I know for sure is the feelings that are in my heart at this very moment and it makes me sad when I realize how much I loved being somebody til you took it all away and left me with no one to kiss and nobody to share my feelings with while I spend these days feeling like a nobody. Jameslee@August02,2001 |
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Inanothertime Member
since 2001-06-29
Posts 72 |
This is very sad, but very well expressed, and I certainly hope you find your somebody soon! |
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Dark Kisses Member
since 2001-06-24
Posts 364Flat lands of Kansas |
awwwww  You arent a nobody! Believe in yourself! Great expressions of your inner feelings!!Mags The hardest thing to do is watch someone you love, love someone else! |
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allis4angel Member
since 2001-04-10
Posts 82Portugal |
Hey, JamesMichael, do you want to kill us with words like this? I read it twice, I find it perfect. Congratulations for the poem. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you inanothertime, Dark Angel and Allistangel for the nice responses...it becomes very frustrating when the person that you are does not appeal to the person you desire...James |
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Jessica
since 2001-06-28
Posts 350South AL |
All of your special attention made me feel so important as you filled my life with a thousand magic moments. Very beautiful words. This read more like a letter to me though. If you shortened some of the lines up and gave a rythm to it it would be even better.  Thanks for the read ~Jess |
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