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Rebelious
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since 2001-05-27
Posts 57
Kansas, USA

0 posted 2001-08-02 04:46 AM



To live this life,
with all its pain.
nothing from it,
shall I gain!

The only joy,
is knowing it will end.
waiting for great fireballs,
our god will send!

I live this life,
with hope to die.
for nomore,
am I shy.

My words are bitter,
my world is dark.
you have no idea,
what love will spark.

To lose,
and let lost.
now and forever,
I pay that cost!

My mind shrouded,
my heart almost dead.
atleast I know,
that she was fed.

Now its time to wait,
for the next move I make.
trying to make it obvious,
my soul you may take.

© Copyright 2001 Dustin Ortiz - All Rights Reserved
Inanothertime
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since 2001-06-29
Posts 72

1 posted 2001-08-02 08:18 AM


From the depths of sorrow, grows a new tommorrow--really, it can happen!! Good read, but hang in there, black can turn to color, in a blink of an eye.
Dark Kisses
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since 2001-06-24
Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas
2 posted 2001-08-02 12:53 PM


"Maybe when the door of happiness closes, another
opens, but often times we look so long at the closed
door that we don't see the one which has been opened
for us."

Keep your faith, there's something *good* out there  

Mags

The hardest thing to do is watch someone you love, love someone else!

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2001-08-03 05:04 PM


Sometimes it seems like we get more than our fair share of pain...but I think everything comes to us if we embrace it...James
Allysa
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In an upside-down garden
4 posted 2001-08-03 07:46 PM


You'll feel like this until you find something (or someone) that empowers you so much that the only reason you get up every morning is to hope to see them.  You'll start to feel the anger (or whatever) leak out of you for a little while (atleast) and it'll be okay again.  Eventually though, it'll all come back, and you just have to wait it out.  Never do anything you're gonna regret.  Life goes in cycles.  I'm crazy, I know, but it's true.
Good read though!

Someone once taught me that it doesn't matter what other people think of you as long as you like yourself.  That's what I live by.

qtpieelmo
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5 posted 2001-08-03 11:28 PM


"Hide not your talents, they for use were made. What's a sundial in the shade?" I loved this, but this is not worth dwelling over, get out & make new memories, if u hide u will miss out on great opportunities (trust me i know)It gets better i promise!   LOVE ELMO <3
Jenn Cirrincione
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6 posted 2001-08-04 12:38 PM


Hmmm very sad... very dark... I hope this all gets better for you. Nice write.

Jenn

"Baby I've been drifting away, dreaming all day, of holding you, touching you, the only thing that I wanna do is be with you..."Faith Hill

Jessica
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since 2001-06-28
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South AL
7 posted 2001-08-05 04:04 AM


Deep words... the format was awesome! Your words spoke to me as if I had writen them myself.   Great write!

~Jess

Rebelious
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since 2001-05-27
Posts 57
Kansas, USA
8 posted 2001-08-09 03:18 AM


OOOO I am going through a stage where I can't stand sappy love poems.. this is a big crock of bull!!!! Bad experiences!!! causes me to write this poo!
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