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Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

0 posted 2001-07-31 06:58 PM

He came to me one Hallowed Night,
Speaking of his pain and betrayl,
He spoke of dreams and schemes and things,
And his hurt hiding beneath the veil.

As the full moon sailed through the tides overhead,
I caressed his head as it lay on my chest,
His pain we shared we two,
Again, all my faith was put to the test.

When the Moon rides at her peak,
When the wind comes from the South,
Then your heart's desire seek,
Love will kiss thee on the mouth.

And kiss we did,
An all empowering touch,
Loving away the pain,
That hurt him so much.

A moment's love,
A moment's healing,
Forgotten dreams,
The key already revealing.

An impromptu collision in the dark,
Made all the more powerful,
By the mysteries of the heart,
A moment's ease against our will.

And once more tethered to the shore,
Lighter soulled now are we,
A new dawning of understanding and more,
A stolen night that was meant to be.

*The greatest warrior is one that does not need to fight* ~Isis~

[This message has been edited by Isis (edited 07-31-2001).]

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2001-08-01 06:01 AM

This has a very nice flow Isis...and some kisses...James

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

2 posted 2001-08-01 08:48 AM

How enchanting! This had me in hook, line and sinker.
"A new dawning of understanding and more,
A stolen night that was meant to be."
Just beautiful, Isis.
Thanks for the read.

~AF~

"Reality is just a crutch for people who can't cope with drugs." -- Robin Williams

Hellseyes
Member

since 2001-07-25

Posts 120
Kansas, USA

3 posted 2001-08-01 11:04 AM

this is some good STUFF../Drew/

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Jessica

Member

since 2001-06-28

Posts 350
South AL

4 posted 2001-08-01 05:54 PM

I loved this piece Isis... Very good.

Kosetsu
Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 450
Alabama, USA

5 posted 2001-08-01 06:22 PM

This was a nice one Isis. I really liked the imagery...gives it that old fairy tale sort of sound to it.

-Kosetsu

Of all the things that I confess,
Here's one that is doubtless
I will love you always Jess
Never think I could love you less

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2001-08-01 07:55 PM

just one night??

ahhh. . . but one that would last forever. . .well done my friend. . .

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Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

7 posted 2001-08-01 08:42 PM

Thanks everyone, something different at least!

Isis

*The greatest warrior is one that does not need to fight* ~Isis~

WRBreezin
Member

since 2001-08-04

Posts 212

8 posted 2001-08-04 09:01 AM

I enjoyed the rhyme and emotion. A pleasure to read!!

Willie

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