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Allysa
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In an upside-down garden

0 posted 2001-07-31 03:17 PM


Use me and just let me go
let me float away
let me be the filthy one
don't think twice about it
it's over and done
use me and just leave
that's all you want anyway
just another way out
another way in
another way to lose
use me and let me leave
i don't want to be yours
i don't want to be
your satisfaction
if there's no love
behind your deeds
i don't want to be
the one you leave
bruised and broken
on the side of the road
bruised, broken,
used.


Someone once taught me that it doesn't matter what other people think of you as long as you like yourself.  That's what I live by.

© Copyright 2001 Allysa - All Rights Reserved
Dark Kisses
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Flat lands of Kansas
1 posted 2001-08-01 12:05 PM


Very good read here.  Full of raw emotions and truthful feelings. I liked!
Sheilan
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Snohomish, WA
2 posted 2001-08-01 01:28 AM


HURRY!!! "Float away" from the person who makes you feel so desolate and used.  Very simple, VERY powerful... I am VERY impressed.


Jessica
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3 posted 2001-08-01 02:47 AM


Alyssa ~ Yet another beautiful and powerful poem from you. I loved it... know this myself. But I still let myself become trapped in his web... *stuffs it in her library*   Very well writen.

What don't kill you can only make you stronger...

Love you, Adam!! :)

Hellseyes
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Kansas, USA
4 posted 2001-08-01 10:58 AM


this is da shkit.../Drew/
Allysa
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In an upside-down garden
5 posted 2001-08-01 12:35 PM


In some ways he does this to me, in some ways I do this to myself.  He's never used me, though my friends say he does, he doesn't.  He's just missinformed.  He thinks that I'm always gonna be around, and I'm not.  I'm not gonna turn down other guys b/c of him.  I haven't dated anyone in a year.  That's a year too long.

Someone once taught me that it doesn't matter what other people think of you as long as you like yourself.  That's what I live by.

qtpieelmo
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6 posted 2001-08-01 09:38 PM


I understand u completely--my friends only remember me crying over my keith--but they cant remember how happy he made me (even though it was there) always the bad--Great job expressing your feelings-- LOVE ELMO <3
allis4angel
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Portugal
7 posted 2001-08-04 05:02 AM


Beautiful, just beautiful.
Thanks for the read.

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