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Dark Poetry #3

Rolling Smoke

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2001-07-31 12:54 PM

Rolling smoke,
Fire is consuming all,
Smoke billows
Death pillows,
We’ve made it to second call,
There’s heat here,
Feel it near,
Sweat runs from every pore
Oily rags,
Paper bags,
The dense clouds makes the eyes sore
Then to choke
Flames devours as I fall.

Gloom

Hellseyes
Member

since 2001-07-25

Posts 120
Kansas, USA

1 posted 2001-07-31 02:57 PM

this is da shkit.../Drew/

Jessica

Member

since 2001-06-28

Posts 350
South AL

2 posted 2001-08-01 02:54 AM

Very dark... I like it a lot!

qtpieelmo
Senior Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

3 posted 2001-08-01 09:40 PM

Inanothertime
Member

since 2001-06-29

Posts 72

4 posted 2001-08-02 08:22 AM

Well done!! I checked for something burning, as I read it!

Terryloveiris_85
Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 61
The middle of nowhere

5 posted 2001-08-02 12:47 PM

this was awesome gloom. i loved it.
~iris

i'd give eternity to be by your side-goo goo dolls/City of Angels soundtrack

goodness is found in the heart, not the money.

[This message has been edited by Terryloveiris_85 (edited 08-02-2001).]

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

6 posted 2001-08-02 02:28 PM

Thank you all
your praise warms this cold heart
a bit.

Gloom

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