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Fate |
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Rebelious Member
since 2001-05-27
Posts 57Kansas, USA |
To weep, is to cry. To lose, is to die. Out of millions, I found you. My heart o'so blue. To fight, is to learn. To lose, is to yearn. Out of one, I found dispair. Do you even care? To fight, is to lose. To weep, is to learn. Forever I sit here, waiting for my mate. WHAT THE HELL IS UP WITH MY FATE! |
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Hellseyes Member
since 2001-07-25
Posts 120Kansas, USA |
good write once again...but i do have a few questions...talk to you later.../Drew/ |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Oooh Oooh--I like--  LOVE ELMO <3 |
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Jessica
since 2001-06-28
Posts 350South AL |
 I enjoyed this piece, but I do think the rythm was just a little off. Very good portrayel of emotions though. Well written.  |
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Rebelious Member
since 2001-05-27
Posts 57Kansas, USA |
Thanks jessica!!!! I was thinking the same thing.. goodjob. it means alot. thanks the reply guys. |
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