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tac
Junior Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 28
New Jersey

0 posted 2001-07-30 09:36 PM


Love me forever!

The feeling of your body next to mine
it's become a distant memory in my mind
the feel of your touch, your kiss, the love we've shared
your warm embrace, the little things that show me that you care

Please, remind me how it feels to love you
let me know... that I am alive?
a man, with passions unsatisfied
all these feelings locked deep inside

lusting for flesh pressed upon flesh
you and I entangled in each other, meshed
tease me, excite me, tantalize me
love me, hold me, gratify me

To the innards of my soul
it is there that I willl never let you go
enter my heart, go deep inside
until our love is satisfied

Love me forever!


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Hellseyes
Member
since 2001-07-25
Posts 120
Kansas, USA
1 posted 2001-07-31 12:09 PM


i really liked this one....there are feelings in here i wish i could express......./Drew/
Tiersdin
Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364
east coast
2 posted 2001-07-31 01:49 AM


Excellent!

I shall
surrender
unto you
my love
o'er roses
& moss
beneath stars
for but
a taste
of your soul
forever...


Enjoyed reading!

~Tier

Jessica
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member
since 2001-06-28
Posts 350
South AL
3 posted 2001-07-31 02:08 AM


This was beautiful... I wish I could do the same with Adam but we just have to wait.

Great expression here...  

What don't kill you can only make you stronger...

Love you, Adam!! :)

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