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Jessica
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0 posted 2001-07-30 12:59 PM



I honestly meant for this to go in here instead of Teen so if it gets deleted I understand.
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Go through the inside
Search deep within me
Find what I hide
Let me know what you see
Don't fear my heart
Even if it appears evil
Give me a new start
Let my past conceal
Help purify my soul
Don't allow the black to seep back in
Ignore the hollow hole
It's only from the sin
Where ever I may go
Come with me alone
My truth no one shall know
You musn't portray what I've shown


4/23/01

What don't kill you can only make you stronger...

Love you, Adam!! :)

© Copyright 2001 Jessica Langford - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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1 posted 2001-07-30 01:24 AM


This is so intimate and sincere...truly a loving write, filled with sheer bravery of soul baring. Thank you...I enjoyed this much.
Hellseyes
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since 2001-07-25
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2 posted 2001-07-30 12:01 PM


yes truly sincere....good write../Drew/
Kosetsu
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since 2001-03-10
Posts 450
Alabama, USA
3 posted 2001-07-30 05:42 PM


This was a nice one Jess. Was this written back when you were feeling...you know? I only ask because of this line:

"It's only from the sin."

I know I've said this before, but it wasn't your fault, regardless of what those freaks said. You couldn't help what happened.

Again, a great poem chica. I love you. *hugs*    
-Adam

Of all the things that I confess,
Here's one that is doubtless
I will love you always Jess
Never think I could love you less

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