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jenniferbrown
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since 2001-07-22
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0 posted 2001-07-29 08:09 PM


When you took flight
so early that night
I did begin to miss
your passionate kiss

The words you whispered
in my ear
the way you held me
so close and dear

Then out the door
you went
leaving my body and soul spent

I asked why oh why
and thought about the times we fought
and then I began to cry.





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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2001-07-29 08:56 PM


A kiss, an argument, and hopefully more passionate kisses for you...James
Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
2 posted 2001-07-29 09:00 PM


Jennifer, this was so hauntingly sad but so very beautiful.  Take care.....Sue

Suetang

Jessica
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since 2001-06-28
Posts 350
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3 posted 2001-07-29 09:04 PM


Jenn ~ I know how you feel, sweetie. *hugs* You give love and pray that it will stay then you just get walked out on. Very nice expression of this awful feeling here... I can't wait to see more.  

What don't kill you can only make you stronger...

Love you, Adam!! :)

Hellseyes
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since 2001-07-25
Posts 120
Kansas, USA
4 posted 2001-07-30 12:09 PM


short and sweet...i like../Drew/
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