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Dark Poetry #3

The Broken Arrow Sparrow

jenniferbrown
New Member

since 2001-07-22

Posts 7

0 posted 2001-07-29 02:26 PM

A broken arrow
lands on the wing
of a sparrow

Uphill higher he climbs
till his life
does subside

Downhill faster and faster
he twirls
caught up in the winds whirls

Then he lands upon his head
once alive, he is now dead
Broken arrow, dead sparrow

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2001-07-29 05:45 PM

some days it's just not worth it to leave the nest, eh?

I had a few days like that myself. Although thus far, I have survived. (I think...yep...took the pulse, I'm still here!) Thanks for sharing this one, I'm having much fun getting to know you all.

Jessica

Member

since 2001-06-28

Posts 350
South AL

2 posted 2001-07-29 09:13 PM

I found this very intresting. The comparison(sp?) was that of sheer brilliance. I loved this piece...

What don't kill you can only make you stronger...

Love you, Adam!! :)

Hellseyes
Member

since 2001-07-25

Posts 120
Kansas, USA

3 posted 2001-07-31 12:31 PM

this is da shkit.../Drew/

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