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Hellseyes
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since 2001-07-25
Posts 120
Kansas, USA

0 posted 2001-07-29 12:53 PM


she is striken again by sadness
but sadness is her life
what brings her to her knees each time
is sadness not the life she lives
questions of my heart to she
has she loved and lost so many
sorrow breaches her thoughts
tearing her up with a great force
she cries out in pain
grief blackens her dying soul
eternal life with eternal darkness
is there any to end the suffering
any with a golden soul
any worthy to stand before the goddess
and take away that which plagues her
may the goddess suffer no more
so open your eyes now goddess
to the love before you

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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
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1 posted 2001-07-29 05:37 PM


Sadly, I can relate. A very apt description of someone who has seen too much loss. Enjoyed this.
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2001-07-29 08:59 PM


Too many lost loves is not good for the soul...hope you find a good one that desires you with the same intensity...James
Jessica
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3 posted 2001-07-29 09:06 PM


Very good... Simply wonderful!!    

What don't kill you can only make you stronger...

Love you, Adam!! :)

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