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Rebelious
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since 2001-05-27
Posts 57
Kansas, USA

0 posted 2001-07-28 11:17 PM



I have no idea what to do anymore..
Im lost and scared,
affraid my fate will suck.
I know the end is lonely.
I know the end is sad.
But none of this really matters,
because to the world I'm already dead.
The dream of makeing something of myself,
is all to funny to me.
So many peices of me floating around...
Every rejection every disappiontment,
leads me closer to the end.
To feel Love.
To love love.
Its nothing to great..
Just makes our happiness disipate.

© Copyright 2001 Dustin Ortiz - All Rights Reserved
Hellseyes
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since 2001-07-25
Posts 120
Kansas, USA
1 posted 2001-07-29 12:01 PM


so things are going to good huh?? well no surprise here, another great write by dustin, keep your head up.../Drew/
serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

2 posted 2001-07-29 11:33 PM


Hi...I understood the hopelessness of this, and like you, I write it out. If this is based on personal experience, just know that the cliche' of "time" is true. Just today, I had to feel my face to make sure I was smiling. I was.   Hugs and hope for tomorrow for you!
DarkenedShadow
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since 2001-07-23
Posts 114
Kansas
3 posted 2001-07-30 07:31 PM


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Jessica
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since 2001-06-28
Posts 350
South AL
4 posted 2001-07-31 02:23 AM


Very nice went... I know all too well how this feels. Just keep your head up!!  

What don't kill you can only make you stronger...

Love you, Adam!! :)

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