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K2001 Junior Member
since 2001-01-19
Posts 31Near manchester in England |
I hate. I Loathe. I am afraid. Alone. I sream. I shout. I cry and i moan. Im taken. Im robbed. Im removed I am void. I am lost. Im misplaced. Im damaged. Destroyed. Game? No. I dont want to play. Im scarred for eternity, or so they say. Take me away, to die. To bleed. Just flow I dissappear. I vanish. I breathe no more. |
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Hellseyes Member
since 2001-07-25
Posts 120Kansas, USA |
hey this is good ../Drew/ [This message has been edited by Poet deVine (edited 07-30-2001).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
The emotion here is intense...but am curious...as to who the they is that says the author is scarred for eternity? I liked this enough to want more detail!!!  Enjoyed. |
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Jessica
since 2001-06-28
Posts 350South AL |
I agree with Serenity... I want more detail!! Good writing but I wish ouu would extend it...  What don't kill you can only make you stronger... |
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