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serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

0 posted 2001-07-28 01:51 PM

Here is another,
just for you,
rhymes in time,
long overdue...
I heard of whispers
in the dark,
and romps of dreams
and sting of spark,
Tales of shivers
up the spine
and tongues that
taste of aged wine...
fingertips to
feather--chilled,
loveliness
of love fulfilled,
Rumors, have I heard
of this--
to taste a soul
upon the lips...
I listen for the
answers true,
and weep because
I'm missing you...
each idea,
a new thing born,
shared with you,
and left forlorn.

I heard of love--
did not believe,
'til I met you,
and you did leave.
A prison now
of memory...
a prisoner
you've made of me.
Once more, please,
just wipe my tears,
still my shaking
calm my fears...
If it's but a
night of free...
oh come with me,
pretend, I'll be
as close to her
I can achieve,
for you, I'd give up
being me.
*and? I would like to introduce myself as your new deputy moderator....sort of like Barney Fife with a sharpie? grin...now let's have some fun, yes????*

[This message has been edited by serenity (edited 07-28-2001).]

Dark Kisses
Member

since 2001-06-24

Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas

1 posted 2001-07-28 03:03 PM

Well then welcome Ms. Fife!

Mags

BTW great read! I really enjoyed it as it made its path into my thoughts for the day!

Don't fear your tears!

Hellseyes
Member

since 2001-07-25

Posts 120
Kansas, USA

2 posted 2001-07-28 03:45 PM

this is da shkit...yes it is...it touched me here, not so much here or here but here.../Drew/

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

3 posted 2001-07-28 08:09 PM

Another fantastic write from you Sweet Serenity.

AND.... Congratulations! wahooo Dep Mod.
Well Done Me Sista!

Hugs and love

Maree

Jessica

Member

since 2001-06-28

Posts 350
South AL

4 posted 2001-07-31 02:36 AM

Very well written!! And Howdy Ms. Fife!! LoL

What don't kill you can only make you stronger...

Love you, Adam!!

[This message has been edited by Jessica (edited 07-31-2001).]

illusion
Member

since 2001-06-19

Posts 296

5 posted 2001-07-31 10:19 AM

I liked the first verse, loved the second - and wept with the understanding of the last two lines. This is superb.

Sheilan
Member

since 2000-02-29

Posts 50
Snohomish, WA

6 posted 2001-08-01 01:51 AM

I am so moved I can barely bring myself out of the abyss your words created in my heart. The deepest emotions usually only show themselves through my pen and paper...surely if you could see them - the tears running freely down my cheeks say it all...

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

7 posted 2001-08-01 08:43 AM

Well hello, Serenity the DM.

Being the slacker I am, I haven't read any of your work. This is such a crime because you write really well! Yup, let the beatings for being slack begin.

It flowed awesomely and your ending was great. Most endings are really crappy but yours was quite good.

Thanks for the read. I WILL be looking out for more.

~AF~

"Reality is just a crutch for people who can't cope with drugs." -- Robin Williams

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