An Angel Fallen From Heaven (repost from teen)

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An Angel Fallen From Heaven (repost from teen)

Jessica

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since 2001-06-28

Posts 350
South AL

0 posted 2001-07-28 02:54 AM

An angel fallen from Heaven
Picked up by your instincts
Slowly wandering into your lies
Not realizing reality
You pulled her innosence
Into the forbidden hell
Clipping her delicate wings
As your own trophy
She was so pure
Not knowing the pain of you
But you had to introduce it
Caring only for your wants
How could she not see
It was the blind fold you masked her with
Leaving the black replaced by white light
Confusing her inner being
Her wings are growing back
The internal scares are healing
You stole her childhood
But she still has the rest of her life...
To fly high in the sky...

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This is my first time posting in Dark Passions. I think most of my work will be more 'in place' at this forum. Thanks...

What don't kill you can only make you stronger...

Love you, Adam!! :)

Inanothertime
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since 2001-06-29

Posts 72

1 posted 2001-07-28 03:59 AM

Very well done! And yeah!, for you .

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2001-07-28 04:05 AM

Nice writing...James

Hellseyes
Member

since 2001-07-25

Posts 120
Kansas, USA

3 posted 2001-07-28 03:24 PM

sweet....i loved the way it changed around in the end.../Drew/

qtpieelmo
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since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

4 posted 2001-07-28 10:40 PM

I like this--I can relate to this--Dp is a place for everyone--welcome to the underworld--lol

LOVE ELMO <3

Kosetsu
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since 2001-03-10

Posts 450
Alabama, USA

5 posted 2001-07-29 04:36 PM

Hey Jess,
Like I said in my reply to the post in Teen, I love this poem. You may think of yourself as an angel fallen from Heaven, but if Heaven hadn't let you go, would I have had the chance to fall in love with you? You'll always be my angel, chica.

Love you *hugs*

-Adam

Of all the things that I confess,
Here's one that is doubtless
I will love you always Jess
Never think I could love you less

Jessica

Member

since 2001-06-28

Posts 350
South AL

6 posted 2001-07-31 02:30 AM

Awwww.... *hugs*

What don't kill you can only make you stronger...

Love you, Adam!! :)

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