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carolinadreams
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0 posted 2001-07-27 11:18 PM



-The Cast Peels itself-
sometimes lost within a nightmare
comes a special sort of dream
somehow within the seams
sometimes comes a team

come within the dream
somewhere within the team
sometimes it is as it seemed

come heel or face
i'm here in this place

come again, no i ask

please don't get lost
within the nightmare of the dream
please, i beg

somewhere entangled in a prayer
self-diagnosed layer, by layer
comes within again something to share

sometimes comes a team
comes along a beautiful dream
comes along a six string nightmare

a six string nightmare
only four are there

comes along two strings to share
two wrestled beings in despair
comes along one again

comes along a once never before
comes along a chance today
comes along a broken door
comes a chance to stay

somewhere, somehow
andin some way

we lived and died today

J.L. Koehler

© Copyright 2001 J.L. Koehler - All Rights Reserved
Jessica
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since 2001-06-28
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South AL
1 posted 2001-07-28 03:12 AM


Very talented creation... I loved this piece.
Hellseyes
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since 2001-07-25
Posts 120
Kansas, USA
2 posted 2001-07-28 03:17 PM


this is some good shkit../Drew/
ShannonM
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since 2001-07-28
Posts 104
Drifitng
3 posted 2001-07-28 08:17 PM


I like this one.  A little bit of a hard read for me, though--I definitely have to pay attention and really read it.

Shannon

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