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Engel_Dragon_Eyes
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since 2001-07-26
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0 posted 2001-07-27 06:30 PM


Placid flames
Upon
Raging Waters

Decaying serpents
Among
Slighering foilage

Broken tears
Staining
Bloody hearts

Jagged hopes
Dashed upon
High Rocks

Our posistions are reversed...

~Engel_Dragon_Eyes


© Copyright 2001 Engel_Dragon_Eyes - All Rights Reserved
PoetryLuvR
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since 2001-07-27
Posts 16
Ca, USA
1 posted 2001-07-27 06:33 PM


definetly a cool piece....made me think.   thank you for sharing it  
qtpieelmo
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since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
2 posted 2001-07-27 09:48 PM


I Like I Like Hee Hee--I had to read it twice cuz i'm kinda slow lol   LOVE ELMO <3
Jessica
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since 2001-06-28
Posts 350
South AL
3 posted 2001-07-28 03:13 AM


Very deep!! I thought it was magnificent!!  

What don't kill you can only make you stronger...

Love you, Adam!! :)

Hellseyes
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since 2001-07-25
Posts 120
Kansas, USA
4 posted 2001-07-28 03:22 PM


this is good shkit...word to your mother....../Drew/
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