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G. A. Webb
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since 2000-01-21
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Stanton, California, USA

0 posted 2001-07-27 03:07 PM


Sadness blue
And envy green
I’m telling you
The things I’ve seen

Through the years
So dark and cold
I count the tears
As I grow old

Loving pink
And passion red
Are what I think
Whilst in my bed

Yellow burns
My eyes so bright
While orange turns
My love to fright

A cyan stain
Or chocolate brown
Will ease my pain
As I lie down

Purple gold
And fuchsia mist
They made me bold
As death I kissed

The darkest black
It follows me
As I look back
No white I see

The final cost
I hate to say
I find I’m lost
In shades of gray

G. A. Webb

Regret not that which you have done,
Rather that which you haven't


© Copyright 2001 G. A. Webb - All Rights Reserved
PoetryLuvR
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since 2001-07-27
Posts 16
Ca, USA
1 posted 2001-07-27 06:31 PM


Great post, I love it...very vivid and I can really relate    Wonderful imagery...really paints a picture. Thank you for sharing it.
Engel_Dragon_Eyes
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since 2001-07-26
Posts 9

2 posted 2001-07-27 06:32 PM


Wow... that was great!  I love how you worded everything... it's just wonderful...
Dark Kisses
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since 2001-06-24
Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas
3 posted 2001-07-27 08:21 PM


Ahhhhh the colors of life.
How they affect our moods
and personalities.
Nice writing here, Mr. Webb



Mags

qtpieelmo
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since 2000-07-04
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4 posted 2001-07-27 10:01 PM


Wow I luved it--so..colorful   hee hee LOVE ELMO <3
Great Below
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since 2001-07-17
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Massachusetts, USA
5 posted 2001-07-27 11:02 PM


wonderful poem i especially like the last 2 stanzas
Jessica
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6 posted 2001-07-28 03:07 AM


Wonderful... I loved the way you used expression through colors. I can relate.

What don't kill you can only make you stronger...

Love you, Adam!! :)

Inanothertime
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since 2001-06-29
Posts 72

7 posted 2001-07-28 04:26 AM


great painting!!I like your style, very much.
poutprincess
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 735
Perth, Western Australia, Australia
8 posted 2001-07-28 06:11 AM


"i find im lost
in shades of gray"

i know that feeling...i know all the feelings here among your colours. great poem, i really enjoyed it.
~dawn

wpwpoet
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since 2001-07-25
Posts 99

9 posted 2001-07-28 07:41 AM


Cheers!!!
Hellseyes
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since 2001-07-25
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Kansas, USA
10 posted 2001-07-28 03:28 PM


this was good...the words went very well together....this is da shkit../Drew/
G. A. Webb
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since 2000-01-21
Posts 441
Stanton, California, USA
11 posted 2001-07-29 04:21 PM


Thank you all so much! I'm glad you enjoyed the colorful thought that kept me up one night. They wouldn't let me sleep, so I had to write them down. Thank you all again and take care!

G

Regret not that which you have done,
Rather that which you haven't


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