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Engel_Dragon_Eyes
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since 2001-07-26
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0 posted 2001-07-26 08:16 PM


Can't you see I'm an angel?
My painted gold halo
Supported by long curved horns.

Can't you see I'm an angel?
My strap on wings
Concealing large dragon wings.

Can't you see I'm an angel
My blood red robes
Bleached to an ivory white.

Can't you see I'm an angel?
My cute, sweet smile
Showing my fanged teeth.

Can't you see I'm an angel?
My cloven feet
Hidden in golden shoes

Can't you see I'm an angel?
My long flowing robes
With a red tail peeking from the bottom.

Can't you see I'm an angel?
As I take your hand
And walk you through the nicest parts of hell.

               ~Engel Dragon Eyes


© Copyright 2001 Engel_Dragon_Eyes - All Rights Reserved
Hellseyes
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since 2001-07-25
Posts 120
Kansas, USA
1 posted 2001-07-27 12:17 PM


hey man no joking thats one of the coolest poems i've ever read....hell yeah, dish it out man.../Drew/
Marilyn
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada
2 posted 2001-07-27 11:52 AM


Welcome to Passions. I enjoyed your introduction. I hopw to read more of you.

Marilyn

Jessica
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since 2001-06-28
Posts 350
South AL
3 posted 2001-07-28 03:53 AM


*Agreeing with Nick*  Right on!!! HeHe!!  
Inanothertime
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since 2001-06-29
Posts 72

4 posted 2001-07-28 04:04 AM


Yup, pretty awesome! Warm chills--


Severn
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since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

5 posted 2001-07-28 09:22 AM


Hey there...welcome to Pip...very dark first entry...

please check your email...

K

I am a refugee of logic...insisting
on unlikely land with every step.


LadyPeach1
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since 2001-06-04
Posts 282

6 posted 2001-07-28 10:25 PM


that was freaky!  that was a kick butt poem man!  GREAT first post.
LadyPeach1

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

7 posted 2001-07-29 11:54 PM


I enjoyed this...it shows the flip side of angels...biblically? Not always loving fat little cherubs...enjoyed this. Welcome to Passion, I look forward to more!
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