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Hellseyes Member
since 2001-07-25
Posts 120Kansas, USA |
Life is full of misconceptions and misjudgements, think twice before judging someone. They could turn out to be totally different. We all live lies at some point in our lives. ---------------------------------------------------- look away do not judge me for you see me untrue to myself this life is a lie a simple front to deceivce you few see the real me you know who you are most of you see a lie, my life a lie to my family totally quiet, self preserved and misunderstood to my friends, unmasked set free and wild, loud and unbound but i too have misjudged misjudged the love of another but that time has passed she will soon realize her misjudgement realize the love she could have had realize the love she has lost so judge no more, my sinful soul if you stay long enough you'll see the true me |
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DarkenedShadow Member
since 2001-07-23
Posts 114Kansas |
I agree with you Hellseyes, why are we all judgeed on first sight impressions... I f we do dig deep enough then we will find each others soul. The feeling here is what brings you to life in this poem... /Nick/ |
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Hellseyes Member
since 2001-07-25
Posts 120Kansas, USA |
dammmmnnnn straight....thanx../Drew/ |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Yea I really liked this one--I am a million people stuck in one body--every1 knows a different me--i just can't quite figure out who i wanna be--great work--  LOVE ELMO <3 |
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Jessica
since 2001-06-28
Posts 350South AL |
Know where you are commin' from on this one. I am one person in front of others but when I am alone I sometimes frighten myself. I can't let that person come out and be judged... because I am the worst at judging myself. Great piece here... I really enjoyed it. |
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