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Hellseyes
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since 2001-07-25
Posts 120
Kansas, USA

0 posted 2001-07-26 10:50 AM


something within draws me to your love
a love thats always hidden
a love that bears down on my soul

something within me desires death
a death upon those that i hate
a death upon me,one unimaginable

something within me eats at my soul
like the unspoken words of my love
and a life full of untold secrets

something within lusts for your body
sensual thoughts of you not expressed
a lust that breaks far past sin

something within holds me back
holds me back from truly expressing myself
and holds backmy true emotions



© Copyright 2001 Drew - All Rights Reserved
Neala
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since 1999-08-21
Posts 262
Florida, USA
1 posted 2001-07-26 11:02 AM


I liked that it kept me wanting to read. Good Job keep writing your pretty good.
-Neala

Hellseyes
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since 2001-07-25
Posts 120
Kansas, USA
2 posted 2001-07-26 11:07 AM


thanks for the encouragement, i really love your work as well.../Drew/
Rebelious
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since 2001-05-27
Posts 57
Kansas, USA
3 posted 2001-07-26 11:17 AM


good write. /Dustin/
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