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Rebelious
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0 posted 2001-07-26 04:01 AM



Where true Love yearns Despair is Love's pure frame;
It is the affect of loves cruel flame,
It takes its meaning from the depressed heart,
And but deminishes the happier part.

© Copyright 2001 Dustin Ortiz - All Rights Reserved
Hellseyes
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1 posted 2001-07-26 10:41 AM


Wow...../Drew/
DarkenedShadow
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2 posted 2001-07-26 03:58 PM


So in turn Love is nothing more than smoldering heep of despair?? Or is Love but a signifacant part of us that leads to despair... in hoping for Love that is. Love seems to be harsh to you Reblious, maybe it may not be Love but deciet you are speaking, deciet of the Love you hold... /nick/
Hellseyes
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3 posted 2001-07-27 12:06 PM


ok here is my real reply....what i get from this is that love in the beginningis only what blinds you and what you truly want to see.  but later on it becomes more twisted, and becomes more of what you dont want to see, which is what it truly is in itself...
whoa..i almost lost myself.../Drew/

Jessica
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4 posted 2001-07-28 03:56 AM


^ *agreeing with Drew* I like the way it was short yet filled with so many thoughts and expressions...
moshpit
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5 posted 2001-07-31 01:29 AM


... Despair is Love's pure frame;
It is the affect of loves cruel flame,
It takes its meaning from the depressed heart,

i really like this part.. you write well..

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