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Rebelious
Member

since 2001-05-27

Posts 57
Kansas, USA

0 posted 2001-07-26 02:41 AM

Life is full of depression,
Thus lies come to play.
putting on my mask..
So people think I'm ok.

If only they really knew..
What life was like for me.
They would fineally realize,
that death is the only key.

I will hold on for now,
no matter how big the strain..
for soon I will be strong,
and flee this world of pain.

I look into the future,
and see nothing but haze.
is my fate undecided?
or is this the end of my days?

Still discourage,
I will not fight.
for I am confortable,
in this world with no light.

I find myself searching..
searching for my ultimate end.
My one true love.
Hopefully god will send.

Untill my search is over..
life will be without me.
hopefully I can make it,
or a lost soul I will be.

[This message has been edited by Rebelious (edited 07-26-2001).]

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2001-07-26 05:14 AM

A very smooth flow...James

childomine
Senior Member

since 2000-01-25

Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL

2 posted 2001-07-26 07:34 AM

The first paragraph caught my attention immediately. You've expressed well a difficult place to express.

Hellseyes
Member

since 2001-07-25

Posts 120
Kansas, USA

3 posted 2001-07-26 10:38 AM

hey man, this is definately one of my favorites now...keep da [edit] coming./Drew/

[This message has been edited by Severn (edited 07-26-2001).]

Dark Poet
Member

since 2001-07-22

Posts 99
North Carolina, USA

4 posted 2001-07-26 11:48 AM

Very nicely done

James

DarkenedShadow
Member

since 2001-07-23

Posts 114
Kansas

5 posted 2001-07-26 03:55 PM

You are truley a deep person Reblious, only if you knew this. Poeple do have trouble becoming i touch with themselves, it seems to trouble them... you seem to have this gift and I applaud you for showing it so beautifuly... /nick/

qtpieelmo
Senior Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

6 posted 2001-07-27 09:04 PM

Wow--i luv this--This poem is me--I am a lost soul--Come find me & we can be lost 2gether--lol--

LOVE ELMO <3

[This message has been edited by qtpieelmo (edited 07-27-2001).]

Rebelious
Member

since 2001-05-27

Posts 57
Kansas, USA

7 posted 2001-07-27 09:37 PM

two questions.... female, and under 30??? if so.. then I would love to be a lost soul with you!

[This message has been edited by Rebelious (edited 07-27-2001).]

Jessica

Member

since 2001-06-28

Posts 350
South AL

8 posted 2001-07-28 03:22 AM

I am a lost soul also ~ you spend your days and your nights trying to find the light but you only end up deeper in the darkness. I loved this...

qtpieelmo
Senior Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

9 posted 2001-07-28 10:31 PM

LOL--Female--20--You??

hee hee LOVE ELMO <3

Rebelious
Member

since 2001-05-27

Posts 57
Kansas, USA

10 posted 2001-07-28 11:11 PM

Male/19....So where ya live?? Kansas here

qtpieelmo
Senior Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

11 posted 2001-07-30 10:39 PM

<----New York--see

Jessica

Member

since 2001-06-28

Posts 350
South AL

12 posted 2001-07-31 02:21 AM

PiP, the New Dating Service... Try it out today, for FREE!!! ~ LMAO j/k

What don't kill you can only make you stronger...

Love you, Adam!! :)

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