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Dee
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0 posted 2002-02-06 05:26 PM


You’re not mine...
anymore.

I can’t just play with you
when I want to,
I have to share your love
with someone else
and she has the better end of the deal.

I used to be able to talk to you
about anything
at anytime.

I thought our friendship
was a good one,
you told me it was ok,
nothing would change

Now I am lucky if I get hello.
I just watch and wonder
what went wrong.


© Copyright 2002 Dee Manders - All Rights Reserved
EagleOne
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1 posted 2002-02-06 09:20 PM


An interesting one, could be taken a couple of different ways. Time changes many things, but the good friendships are timeless. You take care!

We are all just prisoners here of our own device ~ Hotel California, The Eagles

Dark Kisses
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2 posted 2002-02-06 10:47 PM


Yeah time changes many things.  Sad part is ...... that means friendships and relationships also.  Keep your head up ...... things will eventually turn out for the best.  (I hope)

Mags

Don't cry because it's over: smile because it happened.

Dee
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3 posted 2002-02-07 12:44 PM


Eddie, good friendships are timeless, but they change too. It is sad that some get stronger and some just seem to fade. Thanks for being here

Mags, change isn't always good, is it? I guess we live and grow. Thanks for reading.

Dee

Bec
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4 posted 2002-02-07 08:19 AM


Dee... I know that the old "they don't know what they've got until it's gone" line is so cliched, but it's always true. Things get better, new friends come along, and you get to spend more time with old ones... It won't hurt for long, I hope!

Bec

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-Winnie-the-Pooh

Dee
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5 posted 2002-02-07 06:04 PM


Bec, I know things get better with time, but it is the time before that which is hard. Thanks honey,

Mum

leafseranade
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6 posted 2002-02-09 04:46 PM


Heartache is horrible. I hope expressing yourself like this is helping it though. I know it helps me. Like the others have said, you will get through this and you do have the next relationship to look forward to.
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7 posted 2002-02-09 10:43 PM


I know this with all I am...when my best friend got married, everything changed, and he stopped being my friend....it hurts more than I have words for.....*hugs* Dee, I know.
Dee
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8 posted 2002-02-11 03:10 AM


leafserenade, thanks for taking the time to read and understand.

Sue, I know you understand and thanks for that.

Dee

dgvarner
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9 posted 2002-02-12 08:14 PM


dee..'everything changes but the change'..

friendships do change..my best friend went into the marines--boy did they break him down....its almost disheartening..but the friendship is not something one must give up on

take care..

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"it may be absurd..but dont be naive..even heros have the right to bleed" john ondrosic?

Dee
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10 posted 2002-02-13 04:26 AM


dg, I didn't give up on him, he suddenly didn't have time for me anymore. It is hard to go from talking to someone very regularly to not at all, without being upset about it.
I know the reason he is too busy and I hope that works out...but I miss him.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life.     a brand

EagleOne
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Between a laugh and a tear...
11 posted 2002-02-13 05:33 AM


ya know, after reading this again I just gotta send ya one big hug!

We are all just prisoners here of our own device ~ Hotel California, The Eagles

Dee
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12 posted 2002-02-13 05:49 AM


Hugs help so much, Eddie. Thanks.

Dee

qtpieelmo
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13 posted 2002-02-13 11:26 AM


Wow, I can definately relate to this one--My ex-boyfriend promised me we would always be great friends, but I am lucky I hear from him like once a month now (through emails)It's hard but sometimes you just gotta move on-- ELMO
Dee
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14 posted 2002-02-18 03:57 PM


Elmo, it is hard to say goodbye to someone who means a lot. Thanks for reading.

Dee

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