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Hellseyes
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since 2001-07-25
Posts 120
Kansas, USA

0 posted 2001-07-25 08:30 PM


look into my eyes...
is it a desolate wasteland
flying devils and demons
mass destruction and killings
evil and death bringing executioners
an entire world of decaying flesh
a darkness that is alive and entrapping
screams for life over death
slow and painful torcherings
is it only death you see
or is it heavenly sanctuaries
angels drifting in heavens wind
divine and annoited angels
quiet peace and life
an entire world of open love
a light that sooths and calms
a life of love and bliss
praises to the one on high
what do you see?

© Copyright 2001 Drew - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2001-07-26 05:12 AM


Enjoyed reading your poem...James
DarkenedShadow
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since 2001-07-23
Posts 114
Kansas
2 posted 2001-07-26 04:01 PM


Hmmm is the world of yours really so cruel that you see devils amongest the angels? Perhaps there is decils whirling in our words, whispering our thoughts, but control they do not unless you let them free. The read was as I expected... great /Nick/
Jessica
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since 2001-06-28
Posts 350
South AL
3 posted 2001-07-31 03:18 AM


Very dark...   I like your words but bot so much of the "fleshy" stuff... make sense?  
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