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Neala
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0 posted 2001-07-25 01:23 PM


The lonelyness reeks threw my body
I can't think
And I don't think
About anything but you
I am scared for you
How long you have left?
I don't know how I will survive without you
You held my whole life in your hands
What do I have without you

-Neala
(Goddess of Sadness)


© Copyright 2001 Rachel Parrish - All Rights Reserved
Allysa
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In an upside-down garden
1 posted 2001-07-25 02:39 PM


that was awesome.  it's the first thing of yours i've read, and i know how you feel.

Someone once taught me that it doesn't matter what other people think of you as long as you like yourself.  That's what I live by.

DarkenedShadow
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since 2001-07-23
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Kansas
2 posted 2001-07-25 04:21 PM


This is the first I've read of you also and I'm impressed, this is a fine piece I hope I see more./Nick/
Neala
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3 posted 2001-07-25 04:32 PM


Thanks....it has been a while since I have posted I use to be here a lot but then I left for a while. Hopefully I stay.
-Neala
(Goddess of Sadness)

qtpieelmo
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4 posted 2001-07-25 08:11 PM


Great work neala & welcome back   LOVE ELMO <3
Dark Poet
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since 2001-07-22
Posts 99
North Carolina, USA
5 posted 2001-07-25 08:14 PM


Such sadness......but the poem was wonderful in that sadness

James

Hellseyes
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6 posted 2001-07-25 08:32 PM


i felt every word..this was da [edit]../Drew/

[This message has been edited by Severn (edited 07-26-2001).]

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2001-07-28 04:03 AM


Good expression of nothing...James
Inanothertime
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8 posted 2001-07-28 04:08 AM


also a first, but amazingly magnetic!
Neala
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Florida, USA
9 posted 2001-07-30 11:09 AM


Thanks everyone for replying.
-Neala

Jessica
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10 posted 2001-07-31 02:50 AM


I replied to this earlier but it got lost in cyberspace somewhere I guess...

I can't remember everything I said so I will leave it short - Very powerful. Been tere myself... Thanks for the great read!!  

What don't kill you can only make you stronger...

Love you, Adam!! :)

moshpit
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cebu, philippines
11 posted 2001-07-31 02:51 AM


what can i say?.. im kinda obsessed with sadness.. but i enjoyed reading this one.. thanks, neala..
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