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Tasin Ray
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since 2001-07-02
Posts 11
TX, USA

0 posted 2001-07-24 05:42 PM



Sing the songs that still can sing
All the ones still loitering
Anything and everything
It's music to my ears

Cry the words that droop in tears
Forget your trouble and your fears
Everything throughout the years
Tests you day by day

Cherish this what makes life be
And see all there is to see
For soon you will be set free
To live a life with Him.

"In this very breath that we take now lies the secret that all great teachers try to tell us."
                         -Gem Whitefield

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DarkenedShadow
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since 2001-07-23
Posts 114
Kansas
1 posted 2001-07-24 07:54 PM


The feeling that one day we will be united with Him is a beautiful feeling yes and such a way to exprees it espeacialy in the last 2 stanzas, thats how i feel anyway. Great Work. /Nick/
Tasin Ray
Junior Member
since 2001-07-02
Posts 11
TX, USA
2 posted 2001-07-25 11:45 AM


After recently losing a good friend of mine, it is very refreshing to write about God and religion and happiness.  Mainly because i have seen a lot of people remain sour over a death, there's no going back to save the person. Accept life as life goes and accept death as death comes.

Thanks for the kind words DarkenedShadow.

"In this very breath that we take now lies the secret that all great teachers try to tell us."
                         -Gem Whitefield

Hellseyes
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since 2001-07-25
Posts 120
Kansas, USA
3 posted 2001-07-26 04:04 PM


ahh yes the unquestionable phrase of "him"....very good write, it the [edit]......./Drew/

[This message has been edited by Severn (edited 07-26-2001).]

Jessica
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4 posted 2001-07-31 03:17 AM


Very good...
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