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ChibiDeathscythe
Member

since 2000-06-09

Posts 128

0 posted 2001-07-23 05:08 PM

> . my little tears .
>

> my little tears,
> how they have fallen
> noiselessly across
> the muted floor
> dull as vanilla beans
> and twice as hollow.
> my little tears
> have been congregating
> celebrating
> a death of some kind
> for many years.
> my little tears
> are bigger than
> my little heart
> wooden and knotted
> into pieces of you
> why do you
> have to be
> so damn simple
> when i am
> so damn complicated?
> my little tears
> are tired of holding
> onto your heartstrings
> they'd break
> diluting, diluting
> a harp that's breaking
> seas of strings
> red and plump
> as plums would be.
> my little tears
> wont fall any more
> it takes so much
> for just a few
> i takes so damn much
> when you are you.
> my little tears
> have gone to heaven
> ahead of me
> they've each reached
> their little graves
> on grass and ground
> and carpet and skin
> but eyes, no eyes
> and many sins.
> my little tears
> dont want
> to love
> you
> any
> more.

Alysia182
Junior Member

since 2001-06-22

Posts 19
CT

1 posted 2001-07-23 07:41 PM

I loved your poem. I really liked the way you wrote it. Keep it up!

Alysia

Marilyn
Member Elite

since 1999-09-26

Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2001-07-24 12:02 PM

My little tears don't want to love you anymore.

Though love hurts it is always worth the pain. Each experience teaches us something new. One day it will be real and it will stay until the end.

Marilyn

DarkenedShadow
Member

since 2001-07-23

Posts 114
Kansas

3 posted 2001-07-24 02:16 PM

You do know that the eyes are the gateway to our soul?? So when you cry those tears are letting someone in one step at a time, and I feel that this was a beautiful poem and it caught my heart keep it up... /Nick/

BitterSmoke
Member

since 2001-01-02

Posts 54