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Feeling to Ponder
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Feeling to Ponder |
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DarkenedShadow Member
since 2001-07-23
Posts 114Kansas |
I sit alone in this room of mine;so cold, so damp Racing through my mind are images that kill me so In the corner i dwell silently on the problems so vast My heart throbs with a well known pain This dark place in my room;I have visited many times A cold comes to me as I huddle for warmth As many times as I've been here;it hurts worse evrytime Tears soak my face as I destroy myself mentaly Bringing forth the memories and thoughts of times past Darkness feasting on my soul;sucking away all hope Images that race through my mind kill me so Cold,damp, alone I sit in this room of sorrow. |
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Rebelious Member
since 2001-05-27
Posts 57Kansas, USA |
ITs to bad people have to feel these feelings, the world would be much happier, but so much more dull....good write. |
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Dark Poet Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 99North Carolina, USA |
I enjoyed it.....visions of darkness. This was something I could sink my teeth into. James |
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Dark Kisses Member
since 2001-06-24
Posts 364Flat lands of Kansas |
Very well written and expressed. Entering into that darkened corner is quite depressing itself. I wish you all the luck! Mags Don't fear your tears! |
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Rebelious Member
since 2001-05-27
Posts 57Kansas, USA |
hey mags, you know darkendshadow is from kansas too... that makes 3 kansans in one post  |
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DarkenedShadow Member
since 2001-07-23
Posts 114Kansas |
I feel speacil now, soo many people here to greet me, a few I know but names will not be mentioned... thanks all /Nick/ |
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Hellseyes Member
since 2001-07-25
Posts 120Kansas, USA |
wow man that got me here..not so much here or here, but here... that was beautiful.../Drew/ |
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