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LadyPeach1
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since 2001-06-04
Posts 282


0 posted 2001-07-19 08:20 PM


This poem is dedicated to a very special person that I love very much and he means alot to me. thanks for always being there.    

You fell from heaven,
Like a raindrop from a cloud,
You took my shattered world,
And turned it all around,
You gave me hope,
You gave me a dream,
You loved and cared for me,
And gave me a reason to believe,
I love you more than anyone,
Your my love, my life, my friend,
My life I want to share with you always,
Forever until the end,
You never gave up your love for me,
And for that I want to thank you,
I'll promise to love you in return always,
Our love will always stay true,
You always have time to talk to me,
No matter what you have going on,
It seems like you would give up the world for me,
I'll love you until the day I'm gone,
Its more than just a love we share,
Its a friend, an understanding bond,
No matter how much I whine and complain,
You never seem to care,
You always just say "I love you" to me,
You are always there.


I looked at the sky one night and counted the stars and compared them to the reasons I love you, then I ran out of stars.




[This message has been edited by LadyPeach1 (edited 07-19-2001).]

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Jeremiah Johnson
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since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
1 posted 2001-07-20 12:10 PM


its shocking others have not replied to this already it's very good and i hope this makes him feel real special. keep up the good work.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


Dark Kisses
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since 2001-06-24
Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas
2 posted 2001-07-20 05:32 PM


This was sooooooooooo beautiful! You expressed your feelings for him so well.  I hope he liked it!!

Mags

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