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Slight Night
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Slight Night |
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One New Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 7 |
And you know it’s time to leave, now Don’t you think it’s time stop, now Cos I think that you need me baby At least till your safe, maybe Gotta keep my baby warm tonight Safe in arms; just, for a night Tommorow you are lost But tonight you will lust Looking for an anwser You can’t trust Can you see how you seem to run For the easiest house to drum Your heady beat of Ancient glum Turning to the night Sympathetic slum Grabbing every moment of Sympathetc highs Taking my arms in a Cheating smile Come on Can’t you see where you are Sleeping around In this world afar Trying to forget What you are Just a moment baby I I thought I saw smile But it was just A half a try Oh there must be better ways To ask yourself Do you need to take this life Do you hide beneath the lies But I seems I was mistaken Maybe I just saw you breakin’ Looking for some air to take in Loving every beat of my – forsakin’ Needing your love Just for one night more |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
this is a all around good poem but, and please don't get mad or anything but i found it to be a bit choped up. otherwise keep up th great work. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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