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One New Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 7 |
Girl with the red dress I knew she would say yes Follow my sweet caress Come fly with me The girl with the soft eyes you know that she tries but the girl with the red dress should come follow me Come into my garden Laid soft low like eden I felt like a heathen She followed me Green and alight Shines in the night Cool and soft and smooth with her bight She ripped into me At part she was free But she passed away 'Cos she followed me |
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The Exile Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 52Ontario, Canada |
Nice rhymes there!  I don't quite get the topic yet tho: what's the connection there? |
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One New Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 7 |
It's about a guy (could be a woman but I chose a guy). He is the sumptuous desirable object for a number of women but he's a very dark character and ultimately destroys them. His charms are strong enough to keep them but his dark traits are enough to break them down. The Eden aspect was just my thought of one man being the poisened apple and the the snake that makes her eat it. It's no take on religion, it's was just the vehicle I found myself using as I wrote it. |
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One New Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 7 |
Dark Kisses wrote a poem called heartbreak in here, I guess you could call that the flip side in a way. |
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The Exile Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 52Ontario, Canada |
Yeah, i see the connection here! LOL |
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