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Phreak
Junior Member
since 2001-04-11
Posts 26


0 posted 2001-07-14 08:14 AM


You know all my dreams
You’ve made them reality
You treat me like a goddess
You’re all I need you to be.

You think I am so beautiful
My presence you adore
So tell me what is wrong with me
Why is it I can’t feel more?

You want to take me places
Overseas away with you…
You shower me with kisses
I want to love you, too.

You are incredibly attractive
You’re smart, you're funny, and strong
You are gentle with my heart
Someone tell me what is wrong.

Is it my past that isn’t allowing me
To feel the same way about you…
Is it the wall I’ve spent years building
That will not let you through?

Help:

I need these questions answered
Because his heart I will not break
Do I let him go and run away
Or is it my past that I should forsake?

What the hell is wrong with me
Someone throw me a bone…
If he was a jerk it would be much easier…
Because jerks are all I’ve ever known.

I can’t make my heart feel love
I know I need to feel it now
I want to give him all he gives me
But I’m afraid I don’t know how.



"I woke you up and I slit the throat of your confidence, and we laughed in the night and I felt alright" (3EB)


[This message has been edited by Phreak (edited 07-14-2001).]

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Rick
Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia
1 posted 2001-07-14 10:59 AM


Dear Phreak

Our heart it speaks so many words, but mainly truth inside, unless that feelings felt by both, the truth it can not hide. Be gentle but be truthful, be strong but still a friend, let your feelings true or false be told so that you don't pretend.

We are all different, words of truth go further than actions of regret. Love is a road we must all seek and walk, to know its destiny.

All the best.

Rick


qtpieelmo
Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
2 posted 2001-07-14 11:18 PM


Wow this poem is my life-lol-I just lost the greatest guy i ever had on Friday the 13th(hmm) because of the same reasons in your poem--i never known some1 so great & i got all stupid & didnt know how to act or love him like he did-he knows all i've been through & he promises never to leave me completely, but we are gonna go our separate ways & just be friends--Anyway loved this   LOVE ELMO <3
EagleOne
Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...
3 posted 2001-07-15 03:23 AM


I think the answers are there, but only you can answer them. Take care!

"Friends are quiet angels who lift us to our
feet when our wings have trouble remembering how to fly." ~unknown


xEmperorEmber
Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 136
tx
4 posted 2001-07-15 06:16 AM


i find it hard to do the same things, and its my fault too
Dark Kisses
Member
since 2001-06-24
Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas
5 posted 2001-07-16 12:21 PM


I really cant think of any word except... WOW!  Your wording was wonderful.  I felt I was right there feeling your confusion with you.  

Great work,
Mags

Don't fear your tears!

Inanothertime
Member
since 2001-06-29
Posts 72

6 posted 2001-07-18 08:53 AM


Go with your "gut" it knows. Sometimes the most difficult things, are quite simple (under the crap of life), right? Good luck to you!


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