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Dark Poetry #3

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wandering
Member

since 2001-01-21

Posts 92

0 posted 2001-07-14 01:25 AM

Wretched is the heart you've abandoned
Left here to wallow in sorrow
Dark is dreams void of light
Without hope
You've drained my love
To leave my soul hollow
A fragile shell
Left to echoe in the shadows
Where no sound is heard
On ears deaf of passion

lost in thought, found in words.
wanderer

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

1 posted 2001-07-14 03:48 AM

I definitely love your ending. It's so strong yet bittersweet. The emotions that you have in this piece are very well conveyed.
Well done on an excellent piece.

~AF~

GREMLINS ARE TRYING TO STEAL MY PANTS!!!!!!! *sobs*

destiny502
Member

since 1999-11-23

Posts 57
OH

2 posted 2001-07-16 03:47 PM

very painful writing. it reminds me of one of my favorite songs.

Love can sometimes be like magic, but magic can sometimes..just be illusion

Inanothertime
Member

since 2001-06-29

Posts 72

3 posted 2001-07-18 08:39 AM

bad expirience, good stuff! thanks for sharing.

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